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		<title>Checking in on Your Wordsmith Superpower</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Sep 2021 18:56:24 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Randal Pelton, Ph.D., D.Min., Th.M.</dc:creator>
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				<description><![CDATA[Before getting back to sermon application, I wanted to take a moment to ask you about your word smithing. I know it&#8217;s not a word. The spell-checker just rejected my one-word and spit it into two. One of the top five books on communication that I&#8217;ve ever read is Humes&#8217;, The Sir Winston Method. He [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Before getting back to sermon application, I wanted to take a moment to ask you about your word smithing. I know it&#8217;s not a word. The spell-checker just rejected my one-word and spit it into two.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">One of the top five books on communication that I&#8217;ve ever read is Humes&#8217;, The Sir Winston Method. He analyzes and summarizes Winston Churchill&#8217;s powerful communication style.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">A top takeaway from the book is the CREAM approach to crafting words. The acrostic stands for:</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">C = contrast</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">R = rhyme</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">E = echo</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">A = alliteration</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">M = metaphor</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">You can use this acrostic to guide the development of key concepts in your sermon such as your big idea or theme.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I am not great at this, but every once in a while my wordsmithing superpower kicks in. This happened a couple of times the past two weeks.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">First, while preaching in 1 Corinthians 1:17ff. where Paul teaches about the cross of Christ and how foolish that message sounds, I urged our folks to</p>



<p class="has-text-align-center wp-block-paragraph"> <strong>&#8220;stick to the script.&#8221;</strong></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This would help them fight the temptation to change their message ever so slightly to make our Gospel appear more palatable.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Then, yesterday while preaching Jude 5-10 I reviewed the purpose for our series with this broad directive:</p>



<p class="has-text-align-center wp-block-paragraph"><strong>&#8220;We proclaim the Gospel out there; we protect it in here.&#8221;</strong></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The first one has a lot of alliteration and a little bit of rhyming going on. The second example has more alliteration and a little bit of contrast.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">If you&#8217;re serious about practicing CREAM, you&#8217;ll enjoy Humes&#8217; relatively short, but packed paperback (see what I did there?). My Doctor of Ministry thesis, Teaching the Skills of Preaching, is not nearly as enjoyable, but does contain examples of CREAM.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">May our Lord receive glory in the church and in Christ Jesus (Ephesians 3:21) as we put our word smithing (there it goes again!) superpowers to good use each Sunday.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Randal</p>
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